Burn I say! Burn the feelings!
Burn! I say torch with killings!
Scorch repulsively! Scorch with beckoning.
Scorch! Repulsively scorch the unknowing!
Combust to ashes you return!
Combust! To ashes you'll burn!
Flame the seducer. Blaze and churn!
Flame! The seducer shall char and churn!
Flare the fiend! Singe it within.
Flare! The fiend shall cringe thin.
I dare say these to thee...
I dare!
Author notes
vendetta
A contest entry
- Bullies - Victim's point of view by Moon Raven.
450 points, ended May 31, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
what do you feel?
Comments
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Oh my. I really do love the form of this poem. So skillfully crafted. I love the creativity of this poem and the way the message was portrayed. The metaphors were rich and exquisite. Your diction is done quite well also. The flow and pace is set just right. This poem is a great poem all around. Great job. Thank you for the read.
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thank you very much
it's uplifting to know
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