fingers, eyes, smile
shallow warm water
sweet swollen promise
Author notes
“Purple Orgasm”
A contest entry
- 9 Word Purple Orgasm by Mrs LadyEnthralling.
750 points, ended May 4, 2008, 29 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Soft yet Sharp
Enthralling little piece here eoz. When I say little though, I'm just talking word length. Within those nine words holds a short story. There are quite a few angles I can come from/go to, including the imagery brought about by the contest title.
The more I'm reading it the more I'm enjoying it. Fav line is probably "fingers, eyes, smile". Why? It sort of 'moves' as I'm reading it. I actually find that facinating. I hope you know what I mean, like moving from hands lower down, up the body, in to the eyes then down to the lips, all the while the image expanding.
Congrats on the HM
Wishes -Emmjay
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thanks Emmjay. First line was the one I questioned most but left because it meant to me exactally what you perceived. The sexiest flirting is usually the unsaid. Glad you liked it
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wow very nice take on th eprompt here best wishes to you in the contest here i enjoyed reading your piece here
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thanks for an inspiring contest
and the honorable mention
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nice title here damn! just the thought of two beautiful women together drives this man very curious
good luck
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