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Heaven Sent

 

 

Nothing could have taken my eyes
off this angelic figure.

Her beauty captured by the moonlight,
it was then my heart had surrendered.

I was transfixed upon a heavenly form,
her and nobody else.

Like a child without a worry or care,
unaware of my lucid self.

Embodied within a familiar embrace,
of love, warmth, and light.

My soul had been gifted, and lifted,
into heaven that night.

 

 

 

 

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~ Heaven Sent ~

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  • PassionsPromise gold member
    March 19

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    I know I have read this one. I love it.
    COngrats on the silver.

    this piece is Heaven Sent

    Passionspromise


  • penman gold member
    July 14, 2008
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    Excellent

    Wonderful creation for the prompt. So very well crafted. Congratulations on the silver.


  • Arizona Sunset
    June 30, 2008

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    very beautiful ...loved the flow, the thoughts, and the emotions that were felt in this poem. Congrats to you on the silver ~Trisha~


  • Rovingone gold member
    May 23, 2008

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    That's inspiring. It must be wonderful to encounter someone so fine. I love the meter too. The way the words trip over each other. And, the line, like a child without a worry oare, unaware of my lucid self. That's a special kind of loveliness. I can see why it would be angelic and compelling.


  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    May 14, 2008

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    Beautiful. These words are pure and passionate. I am loving the background here too. Much emotion evoked in this one. Best of luck in the contest. ~Pamela


  • Stardust-luvr
    May 11, 2008

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    well done for angels bring forth an awe of peaceful promise embodied deep within our soul. thank you for entering and many blessings always xxx


  • first forgotten
    May 10, 2008
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    my god, you are an amazing writer! i love your poems so much, fabulous!

  • loversway
    May 6, 2008
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    Awesome-good luck


  • PerfectImperfection
    May 4, 2008

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    Wow! This is just amazingly beautiful!! Every bit of this just screams tenderness, adoration, and intensity of love... Excellent piece of penning here!!!


  • delightfulmess silver member
    May 3, 2008

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    Beautiful
    spiritual bliss spilled forth here.

    Love you

    Delila


  • Kelli Marie
    May 3, 2008

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    Ah, how beautifully penned. Great imagery. A lovely write. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
    Kelli


  • Whispering Wind Moderators member
    May 3, 2008

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    Such beauty and peace you have layed out before us to read...flows like a sweet red wine that teases the tongue ever so softly...niaish for sharing with me and winner wrote all over it

  • Bob Fox
    May 3, 2008

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    Gifted and Lifted

    That is a great line tony.. And masterful words about a heart captivated by such a beauty. So wonderful and so very eloquent my friend

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