Sacred waters flow
from unknown depths
into a pool of tranquility
Everything that is unclean
and is harm to the spirit
is washed away forever
A Baptism of the soul
can renew life and give
one a sense of inner peace
Author notes
Picture is from Photobucket-
Artist Unknown...Sorry
A contest entry
- - Take a Moment to Cleanse - by Desire.
700 points, ended May 6, 2008, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: Soul Cleansing:
This piece tugged at Spirit and as I read this several
times. I felt this feeling of tranquility and seeing ripples in water as if taking toxins, negativity out to sea...~
I was seeing waterfalls, also looked like the ones in Hawaii and also turtles swimming in the water...Beautiful!
Powerful images You have brought forth
These lines grabbed and pulled~
A Baptism of the soul
can renew life and give
one a sense of inner peace:
Peaceful take on the prompt~
Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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VERY BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN POEM-GOOD JOB!!!!!!!!!!
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