A
simple fifty
words of sorrow
silently swim within me
swaying with what should have
been before discovering it'll never be
As
the last
of my words
start to trickle out
of the faucet, watering mind
I'm suddenly soaked, swamped with emotion
overflowing, vivid memories from a long ago time...
Author notes
what can you do with 50 words???
50 words. no more. no less.
In a list
A contest entry
- what can you do with 50 words??? by righteousme.
525 points, ended May 3, 2008, 8 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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A beautiful presentation as well as a beatiful composition--very well-deserving of the Gold!!
Well Done & congratulations
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i love when i finish a contest and find out i rewarded you... great write... i love the metaphors in this piece... i like the "im suddenly soaked, swamped with emotion"... tight stuff... thanks for sharing... i guess you got some inspiration back...
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You did a plenty hahaaha I suppose this question was answeredlol good luck
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