Wish i could have known you
Too bad you were heaven sent
and heaven taken
I look up at the stars
I know you can see me mother
I wish on the brightest one i see
That i could meet you
If only it was for a moment
It would be long enough
to fill my eternity
Oh my mother
How i wish i could be with you
Oh how i wish and wish
to be the son you wanted
Mother please shine a light on me
Guide my path through the darkness
Please always be with me
The mother i'll never know
My guardian angel oh so high
Protect me always mom
Love me in your heart
I wish i could have met you
Author notes
Mom- January 27, 1988
A contest entry
- Heaven Sent ~ Inspirational/Spiritual ~ by Stardust-luvr.
950 points, ended May 31, 2008, 18 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Write Me To Tears by SilentMoonlight.
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Comments
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This was like from a movie; where theres a little child sitting by her window praying to see her mother just one more time. It was really touching.
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Ah, that is so full of rich emotion. I think this is the best one of these I've read. It really caves in the heart. The emotion is so real.
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well done for i can feel the tears within your spirit as this was written. I am always looking to the stars and throwing a kiss or few ( my mom and dad are heaven sent - dad when i was almost 15 yrs old; mom almost 5 yrs ago) It gives me peace to know they are free of their painfilled disdain upon their bodies. thank you for entering and many blessings always xxx
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my dad died when i was almost 15 as well, it will be 6 years and october for him
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