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Once naïve.

Impossible to communicate
my forgiving nature;
shared with you.

Naïve,
so naïve.

God had tests for me to pass
even through hurt,
I did it the end.
Many a lesson I have learnt. 




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written from prompt of this -- 5. Ineffable forgiveness

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  • LadyDementia gold member
    May 7, 2008

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    Congrats on the HM!

    Ah those bothersome lessons, the good and the bad, awesome piece hun, congrats on the trophy


  • Lady Australis silver member
    May 5, 2008
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    i love you sissy
    congresys on the hm


  • spiritualangel
    May 4, 2008
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    Beautiful. Best of luck.


  • plainoljoe
    May 4, 2008
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    feigning being 'naive' can one be open to see the truth

    Joe


  • Cannonsfire
    May 3, 2008

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    Us Aussies can be many things...but naive??? Nah I don't think so! Love, C


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    May 3, 2008

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    Love it!! The lessons we learn through our hurts and forgiveness... awesome sis!

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