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Haunted

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On a dark rainy night, worse than any before
A person happens to be in the area and needs a place to stay
As he's driving he notices a small house for vacancy
So he parks next to the house and walks up to the door
Knocking a lady comes to the door and greets him kindly
He says to her "I need a place to stay for the night"
She replies "Alright only $40 for the night"
He pays her and she walks him upstairs to his room
They exchange small talk, then the lady goes back to cooking dinner
When dinner is ready, she calls him down to eat
Sitting at the table they drink some wine the stranger brought
Talking and laughing for hours having an amazing time
After they are done eating and talking as much
They sit and watch a scary movie together
She clings to him in fear of the movie, he smiles and kisses her softly
The lady then smiles and is feeling much more comfortable
Soon they get to cuddling, feeling very sleepy
The movie ends, say their goodnights to each other and head to bed
During the middle of the night he silently sneaks into her room
Begins to get in her bed and lays next to her
Ties her hands together with rope as she thinks he's being kinky
He then pushes her off the bed, she hits her head on the corner of her table
Then get up , grabs her and throws her against the wall as he rapes her
Now satisfied in one way, he's got others than need satisfaction
Then taking a 12 inch metal pipe and shoving it all the way in her
Making her bleed nonstop as she sits in utter pain
Ties a rope around her chest tightly, after stabbing one of her lungs
Then gets a turkey baster and fills it with cocaine and lemon juice
Slides it in her and releases it inside her
Her blood pressure and heart rate increasing, but she can hardly breath
Taking some nail clippers he clips her eye lids off
She can't see anymore from all the blood covering her vision
He takes a cheese shredder, starts sliding it along her skin
Hard with lots of pressure it runs over her skin peeling her away
Over and over in the same spots, she continues to bleed to death
While all this is going on he just laughs and says "That's my good little cunt"
"I love when you scream and bleed it makes me so happy and turns me on"
He then gets a spoon and takes one of hers eyes out to leave it hang
She screams as she's in critical pain and dying
Getting his knife he cuts her ears off very very slowly
After that begins to cut pieces of her fingers and toes off
He says one last thing to her before he finishes her
"This was the most fun I have ever had thank you, I hope you suffered a lot"
Licks some blood from her wounds making them sting as he enjoys the taste
Takes her to the stairs he ties a rope around her neck and hangs her
The next morning he leaves and a couple weeks later cops go to check on her
For the reason no one has seen her for a while and are worried
Open the door they see the rotting corpse of a nice young lady that used to be
Covered completely in dried blood she hangs dead and slowly decaying
One cop goes closer to get a better look and understanding
Then without warning he hears a voice, he says "Hey Mike you say something?"
Mike replies "No did you?", "No man I wonder what that was lets go look upstairs"
They go to check it out and find nothing but blood and skin all over
Coming back to the stairs the body isn't hanging anymore but standing
They start to freak and say what the fuck is going on man?
She then runs upstairs and starts to kill them
As one of the cops is laying almost dead
Her spirit comes and says "I tried to warn you I'm sorry"
"My body is now seeking revenge and I may never rest until she gets him"
So it's been years but if you see a small house for vacancy don't go in
For it may be the house of the restless soul and vengeful body

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  • WOW

    thats so scary!
    ahhhhh


    luv the pic <3

  • WOW! That was very good! I like when she kills the cops lmao. The rape part was kind of yucky though...^^ But completely frightening Congrats!

  • Utter and complete horror. The only line I could have done without reading is *He then pushes her off the bed and rapes her* Quite an imagination you have, as this is definitely filled with horror. Thanks for your entry.

    Linda

  • wow. crazy and dark, you sure managed to freak me out. yet it"s also good, you're bound to do well in that contest. a good piece

  • WHat!!!! this was just crazy and dark!! freaked me the hell out!!! you did a good job but.. *shivers* this was just crazy.. Best of luck!!

    Jetleena

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