And she fell..
Where sky meets sea,
her body lies a reminder.
Life is fragile and death
always inevitably constant.
Author notes
Enjoy
A contest entry
- 10/20/30 QUICKIE by Nighttime angel.
800 points, ended May 3, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think, and how I could improve
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words that speak the truth. you did a great job with the prompt. I love your poem.
good luck
kat
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Thank you very much!
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Life is fragile!! I always say that...
Awesome write... well done!
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Thank you!!!!
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