Porcelain tears fall for
memories of clearer days
I lie abandoned by love
upon granite distress
Release...
wash me away...
Author notes
Prompt: Pic, 20 words
credit the artist: http://vampirella87.deviantart.com/art/Floating-56300767
*cries* where did my muse go???
A contest entry
- 10/20/30 QUICKIE by Nighttime angel.
800 points, ended May 3, 10 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Excellent
Such a powerful creation. So perfect for the prompt. Congratulations on the bronze. -
This speaks of remorse and a tinge of hope there ...
I loved your 'porcelain tears' - well done!!!
congrats on the bronze!
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Thank you! Not my best effort... muse is struggling as of late lol..
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lol! Believe me, I am having the same problem ... seems he's gone off hunting again ... if he wasn't so damn big I'd put him in a cage and handcuff him!!!
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hehehe... good plan!!
Mine is off fornicating with someone no doubt... trouble maker!! lol
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Such a sad write hun! You have done a fantastic job! Congrats on the Bronze.
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Another great piece here. I love your words in this as well. they create such vivid images. congrats on the bronze.
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I know this feeling all too well also...so many times I just wished to be released to wash away...amazing how many of your writes are from my heart...brillant once more...congrat's on another tin...
Love,
sis
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WOW
This is brilliant with imagery and deep emotions in so few words. Gee I feel this way sometimes too. Congradulations on the bronze trophy!!
Much Love
Your Sis
Kelle Marie
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A night alone beneath a blanket of stars allows remorse the freedom of release giving way to brighter tomorrows
Joe
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Sounds to me like your muse is right there - and captured a well-deserved trophy on this, too!!!
I love the wording 'porcelain tears'.
Congrats!
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I don't know how many times I've just wanted to be washed away after being abandoned by love...congrats on the bronze...
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release me
from the pain! oh you tell sadness and sorrow tales with such impact it hurts! congrats on the bronze my friend!
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Congrats on the bronze!
This is so full of emotion, the sorrow is almost overwhelming. You have really captured the picture here, beautifully penned hunni
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Congratulations on the bronze.
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Great write hun...congrats on your bronze...
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ooohhh this is amazing.. I can remember long ago feeling this way.. I love the last 4 lines the best. awesome take on the prompt. I was totally blown away with this..
good luck
kat
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Ohh.... blow me away...great write. I wish you luck sis!
~Kystal Angel
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Excellent
What a great interpretation of the picture. So very well expressed. Best of luck in the contest.
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beautiful auntie
i love you its very sad -
-jumps on auntie -
hehe goodluck
through you dont need it
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