Beloved of mine, I sense a shudder and shift
As if the Earth groans, the deep toils towards rift
Cosmic confusion as stars illume to encrypt
A Heavenly epic by which we are named in the script
Hero and Heroine, Lost and Love Found
Of expedition to Rendition and an escape to be bound
Angel, my angel, my most precious delight
O how sweet faces emerge in the shadows of night
When Slumber casts spells, I dream and take flight
Yet awaken alone, bathed in Slumber spewed spite
For to you would I fly beyond all mountain reach
And embrace with a passion leaving no room for speech
I long for your touch, your words kissing my ears
I crave those soft arms, your hands licking my tears
I hunger in waiting as I thirst for the years
To fade into glory only absent of fears
My love I will wait, this I owe thee
Only escape to my heart where we are bound to be free
Author notes
This is in reply to Escape To Be Bound II
In a list
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A contest entry
- Why so far away? by MalevolentDesire.
400 points, ended May 15, 2008, 27 entries
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850 points, ended May 3, 2008, 62 entries
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400 points, ended May 6, 2008, 11 entries
Honorable mention
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525 points, ended May 6, 2008, 16 entries
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1340 points, ended May 27, 2008, 34 entries
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300 points, ended May 21, 2008, 7 entries
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900 points, ended May 18, 2008, 47 entries
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425 points, ended July 23, 2008, 117 entries
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• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Truly someone so talented with such love and beauty is verra blessed. Wonderful and lovin'.
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BRILLIANT!!!
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wow I love this series of Escape to Be bound, each one leaves me wanting more to read and then I click on the next one.
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well done again
I really like how you're shifting back and forth between the two, the telling of your story is superb it just flow and entraces the readers mind I think anyways. Your use of imagery, emotions and of this make again an enjoyable read. well done. Image and Visions
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WOW....an absolutely beautiful write, it flows so smoothely and your use of language and rhyme is excellent.
Thanks for sharing.
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Great job, in the last paragraph especially. Beautiful language and emotion.
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very well written and emotion-filled. great take on the prompt, i thoroughly enjoyed this. well done and thanks for entering!
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amazing!
this is so beautiful hun...
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Beautifully done.. I liked it..lol. I think that it all that I will say for now lol.
Angel
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Wonderful rhyme and imagery. The title bound to be free and the ending line conjures up freedom found within loving another person. Thank you for entering this into my contest.
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thank you for providing a forum in which I could show it.
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oh and thanks for entering it in my contest!
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wow this was an amazing poem ! i just might add it to my finalists list ! great job. I can totally relate to it all.=D
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thanks for entering! this was a very lovely piece to read! you did a very nice job! good luck in the contest!
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Wow, this is my favorite by far. Amazing word usage, as usual, and absolutely beautiful. The last stanza is especially wonderful.
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This made me cry!!! It was just to tender hearted.. I really don't know what to say, after reading this my emotions are just going everywhere..lol. I loved it hun.. so beautiful! best of luck hun..
Jetleena
p.s. if this was written for anyone they are so lucky to have you!!
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beautiful write !
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great job again. rhyming was good, again, and i really like this one better than the first. great job!
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This is a very moving poem of love and waiting. I felt myself drawn into the words, and actually forgot to breathe.
This is an awesome piece, and I enjoyed reading it immensely.
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Oh, my goodness!
I was biting my nails while reading this. The rhyme is clever and the words breathtaking!!!!!
BRAVO!!!!!!
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Prophetic...
My favorite was
"For to you would I fly beyond all mountain reach
And embrace with a passion leaving no room for speech"
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"Only escape to my heart where we are bound to be free "
Lo-Amo! Very Phrophetic!
Salute!!!
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