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Chocolate is not for dogs

Wisdom is not for the dull of mind,
but those who choose to not be confined.

Words are not for the mute of tongue,
but said by those with strong breaths in their lung.

Faith is not found in those feeling blessed,
But is followed by those who are lest.

Time does not bother those with good fortune,
but seems to escape from those out of tune.

Time will continue to slip everyday,
If we hopelessly just waste our lives away.

Faith will be fallowed with reverence or not,
For those who abandon, evil will wrought.

Words are spoken all aloud,
It is he who listens that will be endowed.

Wisdom is passed down by century's of proud
but we still don't remember what is not allowed.

 

We all need to rise to support the occasion we desire,

Or else be doomed to face eternal fire.




Author notes

I know the title is kinda out there but it is connected. you just have to figue it out.

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  • Rhythm Child
    December 16, 2008

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    i loved the originality of this poem, and also the fact that its extremely ambiguous in my eyes
    i can really read so much into this
    and i loved the title


  • faithful-star
    May 28, 2008

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    Very nice, I liked how thw poem kind of had a message hidden in there. This only thing that I saw that could be fixed is in the 6th line, it should be "followed". That's pretty much it...nice write!


  • CinematicInk
    May 5, 2008
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    haha, very witty poem.
    a job well done!


  • Master-G
    May 4, 2008

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    I understand what you mean about the title! but im not going to explain it because i will get all my words wrong because it is to late at night! Liked this poem alot though VEEEEEERRRRRRRYYYYYYYY GOOOOOOOOOD enjoyed it!!!!!!!!!