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Winter

 

Dreaming as if asleep
Waking up to snow
Changing the landscape immensely

 

 

A contest entry

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  • wingsofgold25 silver member
    October 6, 2008

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    A realy nice and well written Haiku.
    and very descriptive of the first snow fall.
    Thank you for your entry and good luck in the contest.
    ED.


  • movedon
    July 27, 2008
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    Lovely write.

    Warmest,
    Mylee


  • DogFish silver member
    May 13, 2008
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    It is always a momantous day in the year !


  • Perception
    May 4, 2008

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    Hmmm... I like this... Very different... And I agree!
    Wonderful haiku...
    and best of luck in the contest.. This is really good


  • peridotPixi
    May 4, 2008

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    i love your decription of winter you have done another awsome job with this one, keep it up ♥ your mom

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