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[ Everyday I struggle to breathe, ]

Everyday I struggle to breathe,
And squeeze my heart,
To break down, I can't believe,
Everything's fallin apart.

What can I do,
To get through to you?!
Got a million things on my mind,
All my visions black n blue.


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  • Beautiful-N-Broken silver member
    August 14, 2009
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    Love it, great write! Keep up the gret writing hun!