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Friday tryst

Parted lips trace,
silky tanned skin
Across heated tongues,
sweet nectar flows
Drowning in desire

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  • Deceits Tears silver member
    May 6, 2008

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    Desirable Hot and Flows like Nectar

    Hot Write


  • Unsigned gold member
    May 4, 2008
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    comes up for air....

    damn that Desire..

    Simon...

  • Aisades
    May 2, 2008

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    Sweltering potent imagery. Your poem tantalized the night with seduction.