I didn't think that it would end all so soon
I just thought about you
I reached all that I could
But it still wasn't Enough!!!!!
I didn't want to lose you
Especially against me
I thought it over, but you didn't give it time
No, you just walked away
Away from this world
You said in your own words you wanted help
And I tried to give it you
Oh how I tried
But I guess I couldn't save you
Before you died
A contest entry
- A Wrong World Turned Worse by MusicMattnessLives.
475 points, ended June 10, 2008, 38 entries
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Comments
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i'll be completely honest, i teared up. teen suicide is the one thing that upsets me more than anything. its my goal in life to prevent it. but thanks for entering. this was really good. it does NOT show your view on the world, however it DOES show the pain and hatred in the world, and for that, it qualifies. thanks again. best of luck and good write.
~MRH~
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