Where can I go?
without you my LORD!
Never I had lonely journey till now
In childhood days, mother took me to her hands
at youth times, father guided me
at mid age better half made best advices
at this sun setting age I seek your hold my lord !
Author notes
what can you do with 50 words???
A contest entry
- what can you do with 50 words??? by righteousme.
525 points, ended May 3, 2008, 8 entries
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thank you so much for yr entry into my contest... i loved it and it made me think of Him and how everything is made for and returned to Him... blessed...
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childhood is one word but i will let it go.
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