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Solitude

Taken upon yourself
To paint me a new world,
Canvassed; colors
Weaving a new dream
Picture all complete
Where are you now?

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  • amaranthine lover gold member
    May 3, 2008
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    I like the way that you ended this piece, nicely written thanks for entering