Sitting here in the night
the moon reflecting in your eyes
my feelings overtake me
and I cannot breathe or think
There is a softness in your voice
that sends my head reeling
it speaks of past bedtime
fairy tale endings, and of
promises to be kept
There is an urgency in your touch
that reaches to my core
it whispers of things to come
sends shivers to my soul
and flees without warning
There is a knowing in your eyes
that touches hidden doors
deep within my heart
like an old familiar friend
a lover from my past
There simply is a way about you
that has burned into my mind
and I cannot shake it for
etched on my soul is a reminder
of you and your promises
Sitting here in the night
Drunk on the closeness of you and I
and simply being here
wrapped in starlight, in the night.
This is how I WANT to feel.
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"Sitting here in the night
Drunk on the closeness of you and I
and simply being here
wrapped in starlight, in the night."
These are beautiful lines, and the whole poem is full of these. You used absolutely stunning imagery, and your word choice was exquisite. This is a wonderful poem.
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Wow this is beautiful
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wow i want to feel that way one day.. i think i know it will be with too. i just love the whole thing it is amazing and truly beautiful...great job
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Aww, I wanna feel that too!
Not being in love sucks. And I want to know what being "wrapped in starlight" feels like!
Great job!
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I love the finishing touches great work
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thanks! I'm glad you like it.
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Beautiful, my friend.
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There is a knowing in your eyes
that touches hidden doors
deep within my heart
like an old familiar friend
a lover from my past
wow this is my favorite part! This is stunning I love the way you look at things. This is a great poem! I cant wait to read the rest(you said you wernt finished
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Very good poem it flows nicely and is beautiful to read real good work..
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wow even if this isnt done it is still really good!!
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