No music playing
Heart strings broken
Love forever promised
merely a token
Ecstasy became demise
Pain has overtaken
Why did you die
and leave me forsaken?
Author notes
Not exactly my stlye but I just wanted to enter the contest LOL!
http://tarikt.deviantart.com/art/Silence-77811582 picture credit
A contest entry
- Pic Prompt PIF semi-quickie.... Come See.... by kiwigirljacks.
850 points, ended May 3, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - all HM winners! by Cat10.
850 points, ended May 19, 2008, 39 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - The Largest Contest On AP!!!! by xxRainbowDawnxx.
3000 points, ended August 26, 2008, 1666 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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so very well written i liked it alot. thanks for entering my contest i wish you the best of luck.
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Shelly -
This is a very provoking write. I really enjoyed it. Good job and Best of luck.
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OHHHHHHHHHHHH MY. This is amazing, you seem to be capable of giving me a poem that relates to me right now
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mmm, tihs was an overwhelming piece love, you did well for a short write.. loved it and good luck!
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For some odd reason, I clearly understand the first half of this poem but somehow the second half became a bit cloudly for me...Nevertheless good luck
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Thank you for entering my short poems contest. This is a very tender and well written poem. It tells of a great love.
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love it! very powerful, so much said in so few words...
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lol, once agian thanks for entering! already commented this one! good luck!
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thanks for entering! and I'm sorry that this took so long to comment! was gone ALL day! nice job though! good luck!
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Sounds like an excellent music lyric.
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Very good. I haven't yet seen the picture but I don't need to. The emotion is very clear to see.
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Very well done for the pic... love the tragic take and the music reference you incorporated in here... love it!
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ah we need music and love to keep the heart and the spirit singing in life, without it we might wither away. a good poem.
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Excellent connection to the picture-prompt with "music" and "strings." Very nice rhyming. Nicely told with an economy of words.
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