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Free Write II

And you build me up
like stackable styrofoam cups
while I am drowning in coffee rings
and chaos.

At 2am I'm laughing
you turn me inside out
and rearrange my emotions
like a good lawyer, you melt me down
and I smile at your honesty.

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he said, "she's also a composer, but with words"

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