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War’z Songz

Close your eyes because I’ve brought you gifts
I sent my 3-Horsemen to dethrone 2 stiffs
“The THINKER and LEGEND” have paid allies to win these warz
They don’t think very much, so I’m assigning chores

I sent my 3-Horsemen to dethrone 2 stiffs
The pounding of my landslide is really a gift
“Think long, think wrong” is my thinking song
I’ve dug some graves, for where you belong

“The THINKER and LEGEND” have paid allies to win these warz
If only they could count, they’d know the score
I shift my shape to a high plateau
I’ve watched my adversaries glow—how little they know...

They don’t think very much, so I’m assigning chores
This is thought-penetration, prevailing over yours
I’m leading my Horsemen with my ‘4 Horse-Stance’
Go now! Begin the assault (I've struck, cracking the asphalt)…

DOOM! DOOM! DOOM!

The THINKER’s invited to our lights-out show
This Page Inker’s ready to go…
As I sketch out cracks, he sinks below
I knocked on LEGEND’s door…
He thought I came for somebody else
(Talk about slow…)
“Poison Pen” prances in prissy, pitiful precincts
(Of pretentious polemics)
He’s an unpolished ‘pony-show’ filled with gimmicks
Gimme’ this…!
I bandaged 2 SMASHED-Worderers
Now their genetically, un-poetically fused together:
2 MASHED-Up words that slur…

DOOM! DOOM! DOOM!

Feel this stealth attack
7 faces get 1 mega-smack!
I’m 80-HD, riding off-track
So please forgive me, for my verbosity
I torched the room on 3
He’s always yapping about his dull ‘vernacular’
A 7th class Assassin’s not too spectacular…
I can see the nervous twitch of their thongs…
Hear the drums of our “War’z Songz”

DOOM! DOOM! DOOM!

I’m bending metal
This golden child has come to unsettle
Medal honors go to my General  
He stopped me from dicing them in silver shrapnel
So I’ll pound on them with lead instead
In their heads, they’re already dead
They’ve posted adds for help to read what I said
My liquid metal lines freeze the tongue

I caused, "The THINKER’s frost"

You don't even have a job

But you want to be BOSS?
They’re fumbling in the sandbox trying to find what they lost
This pounding is their “Response-cost”…
DOOM!

Author notes

Disclaimer: This is just for fun; we are collaborators and do this for sharpening our wit...AND to be honest, for fun. In this latest addition, "GENERAL TERRAIN" (or "Terrain") has re-appeared, leading a 'strike' on "The THINKER", LEGEND and some other characters (in this battle of "Wordz"...lol). As part of our on-going "The THINKER's Word Warz". A long (but funny) saga...enjoy! (But watch out for verbal sharpnel...lol).

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  • WiseWithWordz
    May 5, 2008
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    great piece my boy...great piece!!! BRAVO!


    • AsIThink gold member
      May 5, 2008
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      Thank you son. I appreciate the visits (like catching a rare bird in the wild: You are glad because no telling when you'll see it again...lol).


  • ears2hearyou gold member
    May 3, 2008
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    Great Word Warz

    a lot to enjoy within each poem presented!
    well done Thinkers of Word Warz...keep writing powerfully,
    we in America have to crawl out from under our
    blankets of insecurity and comfort sooner or later...
    and the nightly news just adds another layer!
    ears/Seattle


    • AsIThink gold member
      May 3, 2008
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      Tell me about it...I watched with discerning ears. As in, I don't know what I was supposed to miss, BUT I'm sure I missed it (lol). I have a diet low-in-news, high-in-facts. We right these "Word Warz" independent of the hype going on...yet, of course our sensitivities have us vigilant but not to the point that we plan to stop this creative flow of ideas. It's all done in fun anyway. If even 1 person enjoys them and laughs (and the affirmative has happened), then we feel OK about it. Thanks for all the visits and interest.


  • Swangrnv gold member
    May 2, 2008
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    oooohhh...

    someone woke up feeling froggy and I see he just took a leap, that's about to send him into a deep sleep!
    now child quiet your manical ramblings and get to kitchen to cook my eggs girl! oh scramble em...u sweet
    little potty mouth! l.o.l.
    poison kisses adorning your mind soon...

    p.s. swangrnv thinks this was super charged n cool and funny!


    • AsIThink gold member
      May 2, 2008
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      Your really low IQ scores aside, there might be some medicine out there that can help with your chronic denial problems. Acceptance is generally a good sign that you're on the right track (as in, accepting your defeat...lol). I would call you a 'poison-master' but you're not even a good student. You have been poisoned though (that lead paint really is something, ain't it?). That grave we dug you is calling...hurry up while it's still cold (lol); I might change my mind and shove LEGEND in it instead - on his head...lol).
      ---Signed, "The Page Inker".

      (Hey Swan, this is 'AsIThink'...hey thanks for the compliments. Be careful on these pages; these guys are nuts. And are trying to tear each other apart. lol).



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