your words wrap around me
in tangles i struggle
a way out of your mess
forever trapped in your shadow.
no longer my own person
my identity unknown
i'm lost with only you
to hold onto.
your my only hope
but also my destruction.
how can i walk
with you watching?
Author notes
tell me
what do you see
in these words?
A contest entry
- what can you do with 50 words??? by righteousme.
525 points, ended May 3, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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thank you for yr entry... i liked this in as far as it not going too dark... i think i see that it is about a person who is not strong enough YET to see they can stand on their own...
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51 words in there... you need to cut one..
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