We said we would meet almost an hour ago,
Now I am almost worked in to a worry.
Time is getting late to make the show.
My mind numb and now my vision blurry.
Three cups of coffee to pass the time,
And I am now getting the shakes .
My heart longs to make you all mine,
Your thought is really all that it takes.
But now of you, there is no sign,
And our show is about to begin.
So I give up and get into line,
I guess that I am stood up again.
Then in a moment, you ease my fear,
My beauty alas, she is finally here!
English Sonnet
05/02/08
A contest entry
- A cup of coffee by Faithbound.
600 points, ended May 13, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Does this qualify?
Comments
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I am unfamiliar with judging forms so I can not comment on that aspect but as far as the flow and wording go I do believe you did a wonderful job here!! A very interesting take on the prompt...I like it and best of luck
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excellent~
A perfect English sonnet for this poem...
I enjoyed the read very much....
I have this one bookmarked but so far nothing has come to mind...
Best of luck in the contest...and nice to meet you
Hope you visit me soon as well
Hugs
Susan~~~
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Why thank you
I am not sure if I would call my form perfect but I try I will be stopping in tonight to read some of your poems as I like the people who take the time to read mine!
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