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Bliss




                      Touching bodies

                    mingled with kisses,

                      Breathing rapidly

                caressing feverously passion,

                    Anticipation abound

                    journeying into bliss.

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  • Unsigned gold member
    May 4, 2008

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    caressing feverously passion,

    Anticipation abound

    journeying into bliss.

    Yummy

    Simon


  • Wandering Woodchuck silver member
    May 2, 2008
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    Nicely done Michelle. Will is a lucky man. Best of luck in the contest.

    • mountain-woman
      May 3, 2008
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      Thanks for your comment. I don't usually do these types but for some reason I felt cmpelled too and Yes he is a lucky man as I am a lucky woman for him too.