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Exhumed

Missing image

Cadaverous miscreants thought entombed

within melancholy's haunted house crypts

are revived during séances to conjure poignancy's specters

held inside one's cerebral mausoleum.

 

Vines of caustic angst thorns

snarled around the mind's trellises

possessing fingers with hues from memory's cinema

taking the tints from glide into dementia

and spilling them in strokes of retrospection's artist

given life as vivid caricatures as image metaphors of inner pain.

Author notes

Picture credit: http://enthalpia.deviantart.com/art/Requiem-77261766

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  • amaranthine lover gold member
    May 3, 2008
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    nicely done penman nicely done


  • poeticweaver gold member
    May 2, 2008

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    Excellent!

    Another piece you have penned that's vivid, and captivates the reader within me... Thanks for sharing here brother, and once again you amaze me. Peace, brother Timothy aka poeticweaver~