Violet heart breaks
Upon the rusty canvas
The reds break free
Burning the sky
The greens flourish brightly
Towards the rusty canvas
Bringing it life
Hope, love
Where it will live again
Author notes
pic inspired prompt: http://enthalpia.deviantart.com/art/Requiem-77261766
A contest entry
- PIF - picture inspired by amaranthine lover.
367 points, ended May 3, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What you think?
Comments
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Nice one. Great imagery in it and i like the statement you make at the end.
Well done
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nicely done thanks for entering
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i really like it
i dont have a fave part
i have nothing bad to say about it
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That was Amazizing! It felt... inspireing
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Oooh
I like this very much!! So colorful and wonderful imagery! Good luck to you
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