I remove false facades,
as I look into
the mirror of souls.
Wishing to see deeper than
the surface I wear in the day.
My heart yearns for understanding
which most can not give.
Author notes
Prompt: picture (artist unknown)
34 words
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A contest entry
- Quickie- PIF (pic prompt) by Angelflower.
850 points, ended May 2, 2008, 15 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Wow.. you have blown me away.. truly this was a amazing write!! I am at a loss for words!! beautifully written.. Best of luck..
Angel
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ooohhhh, i really like this
its awesome, and powerful
great ending
good luck and take care
stephanie -
F* this is the best out of the amasing ones so far the fricative language took my breathaway the 'false facades' wow
'Wishing to see deeper than
the surface I wear in the day.'
this metaphorical depth is flawless i love this poem. and the ending leaves such an impact wow.
if this doesnt pkace ill eat my hat.
good luck
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