Being friends for 13 years
Do you remember caring
I use to hold your hand
We were so comfortable
Maybe thats when I realized I loved you
Do you remember my 5th birthday
You gave me my first rose
You gave me the sweetest smile
And you gave me hope
We grew up too quickly
I remember hanging with your sis and you always wanting to join
You were so energetic
It was so much fun
Do you remember when we were 14 you held me close for the first time
It felt to nice feeling your breath on mine
And actually hearing your heart beat
You dont do you?
You dont remember the first time you said you loved me
It sucks I remember it all
It makes me cry all the time
Yet you look so clueless
So lost
You cant remember a damn thing
I loved you then and I love you now
At least dont forget that
Do you remember our first kiss
Of course not
Your caught in that girls web and your brain is fogged
At least tell me you remember me
Author notes
Option 3
A contest entry
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Comments
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It is so sad to love someone and not have it returned. Nice poem.
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Yea but sadly it happens to everyone. To find the right one we have to fall for so many wrong ones.
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this is very touching. and of course I remember those days. I like this.
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Thanks
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god i remember those days, that was the best time of our lives, this struck up an old memory so i had to call him up and he said that he was thinking about that time to so yeah this is a great poem and it shows that you never forget anything about that time
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Liked this a lot.Gave me some good pointers on a write.
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great
i love this... it could be turned into a great novel im sure if you expanded on it. im sorry this person doesnt realize you love them. i have had the same thing happen to me, and it sucks. best of luck
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Thank you all. Even though things didnt work out the memories mean more to me than his love. Never forget it will hurt you worse than anything. Just live on a try.
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