My eyes drink of you
and I become intoxicated
with your love
I desire you more than food
or drink
My hands move up to cup your face
as a priest cups a chalice
Barely touching your lips,
I breathe you in
Your arms around me, create a world
of serenity for my soul
A place where our hearts beat
together as one
Like a rose that thrives with the warmth
of the sun,
I feel your love throughout my being
and I blossom only for you
Please tell me what you think
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*Sigh* This is a beautiful piece of expression, revealing what the heart knows... Nicely penned piece of love's devotion.
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Excellent
Like a rose that thrives with the warmth
of the sun,
I feel your love throughout my being
and I blossom only for you
Very beautiful
Love the structure and flow
Rick
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BREATH TAKING
Sweet words of love and a tender need flow from your golden pen my sweet sister
My eyes drink you in...desire more than food...I breathe you in...sighs...niaish so much for being you for me...I do love your poem
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So passionate and so full of love for another! I so enjoyed reading this morning. Keep up the amazing and beautiful writing you are truly gifted
Theresa
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SWEETLY PASSIONATE!!!
These words which are so sweet and tender would inspire anyone.
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Nor my word love, so beautiful, so very beautiful. My heart feels full.
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Beautiful write. Just beautiful. What depth of emotion you capture in this one. Breathless.
Garrison
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WOW! I am impressed with your writing skills, my friend. I love this. It speaks from the heart and to the heart. Keep the ink flowing and good luck! Love and hugs...
~Donna~
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aww.. such a cute poem...jeje
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outstanding!
your return to writing is greatly appreciated by me, especially when I can be treated to a masterpiece of romantic melodies such as this! wow! this is awesome!
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Lovely!
You have skills, and I enjoy reading you!
Much love and light, your friend, Timothy xo
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such sweet flowing feelings that caress your heart strings, as your blossom and open for this love. I wish you much happiness and joy with love in your life.
thank you kindly for sharing this with me.
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warm
desire, passion and love all shout out of every line. Such depths are lovely and hard to find in life.
If you get a mo, plz look at one of mine.
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Great
What a great poem. You describe a passionate and romantic love such as would make any person content. The kind that a man or woman would be willing to give up everything for.
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