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Firebird and the Rose [from the curcified violin]




''I loved you from the moment when,

you loved the red rose,

the violin plays light.''

The sound is silent,

deciphering heaven's music,

full of spiritual energy,

and giving life to dead souls,

and in the silent light, the blood flows,

from its wounds like Enoch coming back,

from heaven to the world bringing a message,

from the book of life:

the pure and true sense of life,

with heaven's love for life,

and with heaven's love in his heart

a remedy for all pains...


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Firebird gave to the rose such peace:

''Emptiness;

and a storming inside the emptiness...

and the storm of emptiness,

created one bright flash of instant light,

in which rest and peace conquered her,

overcoming the order of emotion:

the selfish soul,

and becoming a body of light:

the spirtual owner of love with peace...









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  • OMG! Such beauty and power behind these words. Also truth. Favorite lines: from the book of life: the pure and true sense of life, with heaven's love for life, and with heaven's love in his heart a remedy for all pains.... the selfish soul, and becoming a body of light: the spirtual owner of love with peace....

    Thanks for writing this very beautiful piece.


  • Endeavor gold member
    May 3

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    Very good


    from the book of life:
    the pure and true sense of life,
    with heaven's love for life,
    and with heaven's love in his heart
    a remedy for all pains...

    Thank you for telling me about this

    Very beautiful

    Rick

  • Ah..what else can I say that you created a piece of the peace..well done...


  • Gone
    May 2

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    I nice write about the power of inward thought and sound. I really liked it, even though I am an outright atheist with no spiritual beliefs, (except maybe Kharma to some degree, although I believe this is simply an innate or other conscience which has been instilled in me)

    much love
    James x
  • The silent music of the sphears fill the Cosmos with life to all Creation,
    A beautiful message you convey in this wonderful and soothing poem beloved poetess.
    Well done.
    Nick.

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