Feeling your skin
touching me tonight
moving as one
Author notes
“Purple Orgasm
In a list
A contest entry
- 9 Word Purple Orgasm by Mrs LadyEnthralling.
750 points, ended May 4, 2008, 29 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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now there is a picture to dream about...warm and enticing...the feeling of being one with someone you love...Cool! congrats of the green
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yes this was like a sensual pent house tease getting the juices flowing i want to wish u ood luck in the contest
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Thank you
Thank you for your beautiful comments and the HM
It is greatly appreciated.
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Wonderful, brief... I believe the correct word would be "succinct".
I like the format, with the 4-5-4 syllable count.
Great response to a cool prompt.
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Thank you
Thank you so much for enjoying my work.
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ooooooooooh lala
darn you are hot with this piece. good luck to you in the contest this was loaded with heat
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Thank you
This contest was loaded with a lot of passion and heat -
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your aint never lying my jewels is a hot tush period
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lucky man
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Ohhh. my my my.. very sensual... and I love sensual lol
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Thank you
Thank you so much. You can never have enough sensual writing here lol
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lol, this was really good!! I like it! best of luck friend!!
Jetleena
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Thank you
Thank you very much. these seem to get tougher as they go
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