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the substance of low light

 
 
 
 
 
there is time beneath words.

 

just enough between them
to remember empty knowledge,
 
as idle moments
stutter

from epileptic lips
 
it is always
the absent sounds
that spit answers through
me,
 
such as how a blue moon weighs
less than its light:
 
 
 
this was just one whisper
that a sentinel of night
once pressed against these
ears.
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 

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  • Suzanne Dia gold member
    May 2

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    this is where we see a heavyweight weigh in and steal the contest (sorry, not a kiss of death, you watch.)

    the moons weight
    is as heavy
    as the whisper
    it took to write this.


  • ArtFullyMe gold member
    May 2

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    the moon always weighs less than its light for me but I couldn't begin to word .....why


  • NurseChilly gold member
    May 2

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    oohh golly... this weighs in with the heavy weights girl... once pressed against these ears... a slow voice, a whisper can only ache..

    i feel every inch of this luv

    yup

    G.x