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The cute sparrow

A LITTLE bird, with plumage brown,
Beside my window flutters down,
A moment chirps its little strain,
Then taps upon my window-pane,
And chirps again, and hops along,
To call my notice to its song;
But I work on, nor heed its lay,
Till, in neglect, it flies away.

So birds of peace and hope and love
Come fluttering earthward from above,
To settle on life's window-sills,
And ease our load of earthly ills;
But we, in traffic's rush and din
Too deep engaged to let them in,
With deadened heart and sense plod on,
Nor know our loss till they are gone...........

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  • MagicLady silver member
    May 6, 2008

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    Thank you very much for this wonderful poem about sparrows. They speak of sparrows in the Bible. A favorite verse(s) of mine is:
    Luke 12:6-7
    Are not five sparrows sold for two pennies? And not one of them is forgotten before God. Why, even the hairs of your head are all numbered. Fear not; you are of more value than many sparrows?
    Your rhyme is great, thanks so much for this great entry.

    Cheryl


  • Puppydog gold member
    May 3, 2008

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    THIS IS AWESOME!!!!!

    Such smoothly flowing words! 's I can close my eyes and see this bird waiting patiently for you to notice and as you don't they fly away.


  • movedon
    May 2, 2008

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    best of luck in the contest!! I hope that you do well in the contest. It a great poem!

    More love,
    Miley