Cinderella :-)
charming she is ;
with her strawberry red lips ;
she was the maid of her house ;
yet a king's queen ;
her step mother and sisters were harsh to her ;
but she became the true love to the emperor ;
yet before , she left her heeled shoe behind ;
for the noble king to find ;
and then in a short time after ;
they lived happily ever after !
beauty and the beast :-)
beauty is a charm ;
the beast an ogre ;
she is forced to live with him ;
then a love rises within ;
she falls in love with this great giant ;
then a kiss is all that breaks the spell ;
and the beast was a handsome lad ;
and they lived "happily ever after ".
Rapunzel :-)
she was locked away in a tower ;
in the tallest room of the castle ;
guarded with spirits and evils ;
only the prince so charming and brave ;
risking life and limbs can come to save ;
the locked princess ;
and then he did ;
they united together ;
and they too lived happily ever after !
A contest entry
- Make A Fairy Tale Into Emo,Goth.... by black hearted rebel.
450 points, ended May 16, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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BEAUTIFULLY DONE!!!!!
There are beautiful and touching lessons to be learned from each of these. You have written this so beautifully.


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This was good but you didn't tell me if you made it into an emo poem or goth or depressed??


