i'll get up in the morning
just to see you today
i shall wait on the phone
just to hear the next word you say
i shall beg you
just to see you once
and when i do
i see as if i haven't seen you for months
for a single eat out
i shall shamelessly fall on your feet
even when you scold me
your words are so sweet
everytime you say
speak to later
i feel hard in my heart
as hard as a crator
everytime you tell
i am out with someone else
i could feel my death nearing
and hear the graveyard bells
when i once brought a rose
you asked me " what is this ? "
as if you never knew
a rose is a lovers bliss
everytime you move an inch away
i shall come a centimetre close
for the 100th time you say go away
for the 1000th time i shall repeat the same propose .
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i love this poem a lot... mostly because i can relate to it since i just went throught the same thing, so yeah. lol. the rhyming was awesome, and i like the last stanza a lot... it just summed it up so much in so little possible, and you can tell there is a strong feeling of love for this person... im just sorry that it has to be so complicated... i hated it myself when i went through it, loving this guy, and him loving me, but not as much as i would like... so yeah. best of wishes1
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