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Heart of Silence

My endless heart
    holds a universe
          of silenced stars.

Author notes

purple orgasm

hmmm, this was going to be a happy love poem, but I guess my words disagree with me. Oh well, I really like the outcome!

A contest entry

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  • Arpeggi
    June 29, 2008
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    wow very beautiful. it flows well and I think that everyone can relate to it.


  • Paincalledlove
    May 14, 2008

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    Good for the contest

    Im not much into the short poems, but since it was a 9 word contest. I will put that aside.

    I like the metaphor, but also the personification of the silent stars... Really good

    Paincalledlove


  • Mrs LadyEnthralling
    May 4, 2008

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    this wa smagical here i think you did a great excellent job in the piece you added here good luck to you in the contest


  • D Saul So Sexy
    May 4, 2008

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    very beautiful words you have choosen here. good luck to you in the contest i think you did a great fine fabolous job with this piece