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somber feelings


hide the loss of purity
torn from the cold rain
of lost tears

lose the black skies of a
forlorn heart that moans
with jagged breezes from

a sinful mind

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a. fagarazzi

30 words

 

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  • MysticalRayne
    May 2, 2008
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    wonderfully dark ~ best of luck and thank you for your entry