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Sacrafice

Sacrifice

By: Julia Clark

 

 

As I light the graffiti of the sacrifice

To be a preacher mic to give lost

Mines chemotherapy.

 

The day has come to

Retire everything you have done.

From forming the lies of Babylon

And running around in ignorance

Talking fake tongue.

 

Shaba la ha

What does it mean?

 

It means your collection plate

Of fake words

Has condemned you.

The day is now!

Author notes

Sacrafice

It funny to me
When I hear people
Talk in tongue
I laugh in they face
Because, if you ask them
What that mean they honestly
Don't know. Are falling all out
With holy ghost oh my!
You can feel the spirit
But it doesn't require such
ignorance. I feel bad
For ones who don't know
Those are act's of Satan who has
Corupted the truth behind religion
Oooh don't get me
Started.

Julia C.

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  • smonte19124 silver member
    August 10

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    Wonderfully Written Words

    You expresed yourself beautifully, poetically and you are a very talented young lady. but I disagree personally with your Author Notes statement. Though I have never talked in tongue I don’t believe everyone that does is a fake. I have met many people that deeply believe in the Holy Spirit as well as seen the many fakers that stop with the music.

    I must admit that I don’t understand what the meanings behind the words are but should I. Maybe the message is not for you or I to interpret. But delivered to the one God intends to understand. Yes I’ve seen preachers with their hand out more than handing out prayers but you can’t paint everyone with the same brush. I hope you are not offended by my views I am just in the mood to share. You did a great job in the contest and are very deserving of the Gold. Congratulations


    • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
      August 11
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      i don't appreciate this comment artist and would like if in the future if you wouldn't read my work do to you dis respecting my thoughts no one direspects me period! I don't condone such low class thanks

  • B Tha Revolution
    July 9
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    wow, fantastic piece, i can see why this took gold.


    • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
      July 9
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      THANKS DEAR CAUGHT ME OFF GAURD WITH THIS ONE FUNNY I HAVEN'T EVEN WROTE A DEF POEM IN A MINUTE NO GOOD INSPIRATION
  • schellou
    June 11
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    fantastic!!!


  • whits end silver member
    May 23
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    This is excellent poetry!!!!!!


  • Rhyming From Rehab gold member
    May 23

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    excellent thoughts penned into this lovely, congrats to you on the gold blessings always~ Trisha


  • secberm
    May 17

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    Shaba la ha-ha he-he ho-ho... What? You don't know know the tongue I put on you can get to you too too through your boo boo make you boo hoo. LOL Anyway, write on. One.

    Dez

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  • HoneyFire
    May 8
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    this is a very good write!


  • Forever in his arms
    May 8
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    I agree with half. great write


  • vampire of thought
    May 6

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    wow...that was interesting, both the poem entry, and the poem in your authors notes.

    I like your take on the prompt (kicks mine anyday!)

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  • leander gold member
    May 6

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    Ooh, I see you have gained a golden cup for this poem, and a very deserved one actually

    I like the underlaying message in this poem you've delivered a stellar job!

    Keep it up!
    Leander

  • poeticweaver gold member
    May 5
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    Wow,

    Congrates on the Gold, and it surely seems to me the language of love is the most needed to know in this world. You make a very good point sweet soul, and I love what you did with this piece you weaved for many to ponder upon.. Thanks for sharing, and I love your gifts.

    -Mushy King

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  • D Saul So Sexy
    May 3

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    on point black shrine madonna. ga your young self have so much style flow your whole persona is on point to me if otha catz don't feel you dats them but you on point with this i like to know what shaba ha la mean to you a trip nice write.

    D Finest

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  • smiley
    May 2

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    HMMMMM

    short and really to the point... I don't know if you have meant to add more or is it just suppose to be like this... anyway I understand the meaning of not be ready to sacrafice.

    Yvonne
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