Rain clouds hanging over my head
Today my wedding
I dread
Hiding out in the cemetery
I would rather be dead
Than marry that guy
living his life a lie
Author notes
photo promt: Ana Fagarazzi
30 words
A contest entry
- Dark ~ It's raining today ~ pen me something dreary by MysticalRayne.
475 points, ended May 2, 2008, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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oh my really good hun! u have so much talent and u kno how to use it!
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would it be possible for you to add more to this? because just reading these seven lines is not enough. you can tell that there is a story there, that there is clearly a reason that this woman does not want to get married and it's clearly against her will that she is doing so. awesome write.
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I really like this ~ the dreaded marriage ~ much better, it just flows nicer ~ thank you for your entry
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This is well written ~ I think if you played with the last line a little it would add more to it. Thank you for your entry and good luck
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