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Vagina Lip Petals

Vagina Lip Petals
By: D Saul So Sexy


Special delivered tongue,
Impatiently waiting mystery.
To masturbate you.


My Background Gifts By:
http://allpoetry.com/Mrs%20LadyEnthralling

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  • jackreed3 gold member
    May 16, 2008
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    Well You were almost there... The first was right..
    and the third line was right... But the seconed line was wrong ... it goes 5-7-5 meaning in sylables..
    Here I am going to float one your way called LOVE..

    Your Freind in Poetry... JackReed3


  • jackreed3 gold member
    May 16, 2008
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    Nice Work... I like this Hauiku or what ever we call it...


  • Ms Sexy silver member
    May 12, 2008
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    ohhh damn i like to the piont


  • Ephiphany
    May 12, 2008
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    Congrats on the trophy

    well deserved

    e


  • Lotus-Mama
    May 4, 2008
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    Very nice! Congrats on the trophy! Sexy and original!!


  • Mrs LadyEnthralling
    May 4, 2008

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    i really like this mr d smooth finest you have chosen the right words to dazzle me good luck in the contest provided


  • Lonely Christina
    May 3, 2008
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    good luck this is very good hehe

    • D Saul So Sexy
      May 3, 2008
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      thanks babe are you in the 9 word game to?
      if so good luck as well i like these contest about to start one now come see

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