the rainmaker comes
masking her face
she begins her dance
the rain pounds harder
oil rises from the blacktop
at times i wish she would slip
but she never does
Author notes
PROMPT : picture prompt 30 words...
AN: this is me trying to be dark and dreary... hope you like...
A contest entry
- Dark ~ It's raining today ~ pen me something dreary by MysticalRayne.
475 points, ended May 2, 2008, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Interesting picture. And there is always the chance she will slip next time.
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I think you did a good job I love the "at times I wish she would slip, but she never does" best of luck in the contest
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