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Lost

I tried to help you fined your way, but your to lost to be helped. Your consumed by darkness with no interest for a light. you say your alone, but you don't realize your surrounded by people who care. I have fallen for your lies, The false love hiding the evil in your eyes. I contemplated suicide, I though of ways to end it all. Love, is the one true evil, it kills all things, you are lost and i can't bring you back.

 

I tried to help you fined your way, but your to lost to be helped....

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Well, my sister helped inspire this poem, she isn't the person i was talking about, but she gave me the idea for the theme. We were talking about the boy the poem is about, and she told me that i need to forget him, because he is lost, and i'm not the one who is going to help find him....

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