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Thought

Thought that I was worth it
Thought that you were grand
Thought the world would turn around
...I wish you'd understand...

I wrote the words a thousand times
but they never seemed to turn out right
Threw my hopes above my head
hoping they would spread

Gave it all but fell instead

Like the feel of your sun
Blocked out like it was dead
Held your hand, kissed your lips
but it never may be enough

Was i enough

Thought we were perfect
Thought this was right
Thought nothing could change that night
I wish i was right...

my boyfriend just broke up with me this morning...

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  • Dead and Breathing
    May 2, 2008

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    :-\

    I really like the poem, Jackie. I'm really sorry to hear about that. I'm sure it will pass. No matter what happens, I know you'll turn out fine; everything will turn out fine.