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Veils

Missing image

Lace of lies

goddess delusions bore,

hollowness's cancer

infecting

while seducing worshipper's.

 

Heart imprisoned

within loneliness chamber

enthroned on vanity's mirror,

fractured by age

and the echoes from love's ghosts.

Author notes

30 words
Image Artist: ana fagarazzi

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  • MysticalRayne
    May 2, 2008

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    Beautifully written and I love your imagery here ~ best of luck


  • jcat gold member
    May 2, 2008

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    Now this was just stunning!!! I love your choice of words and the direction you took this in!! Well done and best of luck