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Prisms of pleasure



skin on skin,

kaleidoscope of pleasure

between satin sheets

 

 

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“Purple Orgasm”

Background credit: Autumn-Rain





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  • B Chandler
    June 3, 2008

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    Sadly this is not one of Celticmoon's bgs. But nevertheless the shortness of this sensual write really beckons the reader in wanting more.  By the by, might I recommend using white font instead of the black?

  • this was a very great piece you penned here i think you actually did a very nice job here penning your pieces here i was blown away


  • D Saul So Sexy
    May 4, 2008

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    my gosh you fucken hot with this ma i love this i think you have some great heat up in you penning this good luck


  • Galaxy2
    May 2, 2008

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    'Skin on skin'...
    Wow!
    'kaleidoscope of pleasure'...
    with all colors of sin...
    'between satin sheets'
    yes...just you and me...

    Thanks for the suggestive erotica, honey!

    Kisses...all over!

    Galaxy2


  • I Wonder
    May 2, 2008

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    Conjures colourful imagery rolling between the pleasure of satin. Great write!

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