where my heart roams,
clothe-
to her naked breast,
…wildflowers
and to her cleave
of ageless skin
tucked between
the morning sky
more beautiful-
are the fragrant flowers,
doused with rainbow hues
and through the grove,
a soft wind blows
her flowers sway
like waves in her hair
my heart lies
peaceful
soulful, I sigh~
reborn, I am
Mother Nature’s child
Author notes
a picture inspiration;
http://allpoetry.com/images/ext/Image/49/591.jpg
A contest entry
- Picture Inspirational by Kelli Marie.
2300 points, ended May 15, 2008, 29 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Nice job Mal ~
A serene paradise of chosen words.....grammatically beautiful ~
Congrats!
Bear ~
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A very lovely piece of poetry. Beautiful imagery laced throughout. Thank you for sharing in the contest.
Kelli -
Stunning, stunning poem......
I wish to throw myself down on in the wild flowers and breathe
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Breathe--
thanks for dropping by hun
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Very inspirational verse ala natural! To restfully cleave in the heart to the bosum of mother nature does her child.
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A beautiful heartfelt write. Lovely metaphor. Nice simile. Very good imagery, flow and tone. Deep expression of emotion. Vivid descriptives. Good word choice, alliteration and nice assonance. Well penned and much enjoyed. Best wishes in the contest.
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aww...this is absolutely soft & beautiful...you have captured the mood perfectly of being out in a field of flowers...love this..beautiful imagery..every line!.....
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