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Play Back Time.

Stomping about the house
in tempers tirade
fuming

my little one cowers
in the corner
a muted observer
too terrified
to ask his usual question...
why?

He works it out for himself
amongst his toys,
my words, my actions...

I watch, silenced, in regret,
at my son's play back time.


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Prompt: Play Back

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  • Purush
    May 2, 2008

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    All the best

    very interestingly taken up,worded
    fully with joy and delight of a parent
    All the best in my contest