Look here, my angel, see I'm not afraid
And neither will I bow down to your God
For I have seen the purest form degrade
Into a state of grey that God forgot
The armies of your kingdom grow so loyal
For fear that Satan will adopt their sin
But I see, just like your God, he is frail
And I will never be afraid of him
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Though I am Christian, I loved your resilience to both God and satan. Your defiance and your strength and your resolve to not be afraid really did move me.
Some people believe that its a two way street, God or satan. But you have challenged that; you have given an alternative, a third option so to speak. It was beautiful and so uplifting.
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Wow...my friend you are real something...
Fear is your worst enemy...so not to fear makes it your greatest friend, and friends don't harm eachother...well..real friends don't harm eachother...
I think God didn't forget any arreas in the world
it must be another reason why he lets us think that...don't know why...and it might not even important to know that answer...maybe we will get that later when all people will see eachother again...
Just some thoughts coming up after reading your poem..
Good job my friend
XXJeannette
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W.O.W what outstanding writing.I agree with Alyssa you are an intelligent person!this is a very Amazing peice of work you have here.I am left speachless.You are amazing and your work reflects on it
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You sound like such a smart person in your poems :] You are very intelligent!
& you always seem to have the perfect words to add.
Keep up the good work, i can't wait to read more.
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And you, my friend, are a very kind person - a far greater attribute than any other.
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