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Melodies

Musical melodies ensnare my soul,
I embrace the merry harmonic echoes,
Mirthfully, I indulge in happiness and joy,
Dreading the time when the mournful choirs cease.  

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  • Kelli Marie
    May 4, 2008

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    I really enjoyed this entry. Very well written. Will you change it to a one word title? Other than that, thank you for sharing in the contest.
    Kelli

    • Liveloveperforming
      May 7, 2008
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      Thanks for your comment. Yes I will change the title and I want to wish you good luck with the contest.